"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever"
-Mahatma Gandhi

Monday, July 8, 2013

Relating Relationships


       
           Jobelle is a simple girl. One day, she met a girl named Ella and they went together. When Jobelle had a relationship with Drew , she had no time for Ella. So when Ella tried to kill herself, Drew decided to be friend of Ella and the 3 of them became close friends. Days passed until Ella met a guy named Jean- Jack, and they became more than friends, and the 4 of them lived happily ever after.

11 comments:

  1. 1st to comment......... I like it, it's a funny story, the name!!! hahaha "Richeerich" peace Rich Anne

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  2. Go Richee! Nice, btw.

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  3. Oh, next time I think you should make it a little bit longer and even smaller font sizes, but I'll admit I really liked the inspirational quote you got there from Mahatma Gandhi.. :)) All in all, good job!

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  4. the concept of the story is really nice! just try to make it longer next time to fully maximise the beauty of your story! :-)

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  5. It's a very nice story but it is short :)

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  6. I have to admit, it IS short. But it's a nice story anyway. :))

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